Sunday, December 18, 2011

XIII

It's
the
semblance
of
belonging-
that 
gets
me
every
time.

3 comments:

  1. Belonging is a mere semblance ? A yearning which fawns and feigns its way into a flexible heart ...

    (wrapped around a coffee pot - as flexible as a stripper - but that men love legs not hearts - mean but honest, base butt secure)

    ... just to flaunt and part
    without knowing.

    Knowing why she writes so of home
    and the wonder of what this
    might
    mean

    with eyes
    different from mine

    all eyes are

    Home and Belonging

    Assembling semblances is sometimes
    a difficult thing

    As difficult as belonging
    Or finding that home is a place
    of possibility and possibly

    already known

    thinking South
    but never having flown

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  2. PS. By disliking "Historical Fiction", I guess you mean "Twilight", right ?

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  3. PPS.

    Your poetry is wonderful.

    I have made my way through about half of your catalog thus far and am going slow and savouring them. I will comment on some of them in due course as I believe that to be an obligation which is born of enjoyment rather than duty: I had grown disillusioned with poetry as a form of expression, so it is a pleasure to find something which speaks to me and seems rhythmically simple and right - as well as being honest and insightful (I'm amused that it is not Yeats or Thomas or Keats, but an anonymous Blog onto which I have stumbled accidentally and stood stunned and contented).

    It's a pity that people don't seem to voice appreciation any more (we still do disdain at least - it's what forums were made for).

    For a blog with such quality of writing and thousands of views I would have hoped someone would have told you that your writing is wonderful and that it is not a scream or whisper into darkness ... even the ether has ears though the voice has not yet grown strong.

    Keep going and be proud.

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